Hello, I have one of my first attempts at poetry. I just wanted to know all of your opinions on it.
A day on the beach.
The glimmering sand tells a story all its own. It tells you the story of how it ended up there. How you ended up next to it. Forgetting that there is such a thing as lack. A ray from the sun captures your attention and you look off to the side. Frolicking and joyful the children put aside their differences to enjoy the radiant sun. What would it be like to look through their humble eyes? To them they have arrived at their destination, happiness flows fluid in their heart. An unspoken understanding that if i don't enjoy today then maybe i won't enjoy tomorrow. A dolphin jumps in the distance out of the ocean capturing an instant that will stay with you for eternity. A look into your dog's eyes so happy and mindful telling you that in this moment, you are where you need to be.
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A day on the beach
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