Hello! After some very helpful info and some practice I have come to(what I think to be) my best poem. Please leave any insights or info that could help me progress!
A man who couldn't love
Each one taller than the next.
Their peaceful existence shuns that of humanity.
The sun sprinkles through the skyline made up of harmony and atmosphere.
They capture what he couldn’t, love.
A forest made by the divine, surely he isn't worthy.
Peaceful days happen here, one he certainly needs.
A deep sensation comes to him with a voice.
What you desire, I desire.
Could you be clearer?
Give what you know you can’t.
I cannot understand.
Then I give you the greatest gift.
The sensation, is named.
Fully formed I give my heartbeat to the lowly rabbit.
Reciprocated, reciprocated, reciprocated.
Love reciprocates itself.
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